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Loona drawing, does anything look out of place?
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Just finished this ref sheet, what should I name her?
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The background is still extremely sketchy, but how could I make the character better?
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setting feels empty, perhaps a (low detail) opponent or two? I like the blurry background, helps keep focus on the subject
That's a great idea, next time ill add some other out of focus characters
The green court doesn't immediately yell 'basketball'; I'd maybe change the color to something a bit more fitting, so it doesn't look as much like flat grass.
Thanks, that was really insightful! Btw you make really nice art
I’ll tell you what’s off. It’s so dam cute!
:3
BNA?
yep
I don’t see a lot that I can really critique, tbh! Your level is much higher than mine! The only thing that jumps out to me is that there’s a bit of a tangent happening with the ear and the hair. It’s near the top of the ear where you’ve got those two bits of fluff. The bit of fluff to the right tangents with the spike of hair coming up from behind it and results in less readability in the silhouette. It’s not a huge thing, but it’s all I can think of. Keep of the good work! Love your style so much ☺️
Nice catch, Fixed!
Wonderful work, loving the fun energy. You have beautiful technique and you really made the character come to life.
Thank you for the feedback, I've fixed some of the stuff you mentioned, the rendered drawing is up now
can I paintover your piece?
Yeah go for it
The lighting is really good - but one thing that jumps out is that rimlight is green. It's a bright day under a blue sky, so if anything rimlight would be blue.
Yep! The reflected light from the grass was too strong, I'll keep it in mind for the next one
Yes, I think so. And your art style is very cool! My only critique would be to make her arm a bit more "relaxed" and slightly less stiff, but that's just my opinion. Your art is great.
Thanks for the critique! I'll make it less stiff
Yes! She looks comfortable and relaxed
Thanks!
as a drawing i like it. i wouldnt be able to come up with a good name for her though, im terrible at naming things lol.
Thanks for the suggestions!
Not sure why I get this vibe, but they seem like the kind of person to have a longer name they may not be too fond of and shorten as a preferred name.
Thanks!
Is that shreddy the fox? (I think that is his sona's name)
Nope, it's just a random chracter i drew yesterday
I would say its balanced in the sense that it isnt leaning, which is something a lot of artists do subconsciously. I would say that the feet make the character look like they’re going to tip over, and that one foot is stepping on the other one. I would say to make sure that the feet are stepping on two different places, so space them apart in the forward-back sense
Her left foot is supposed to be lifted a bit, I'll make it more obvious in the final render, thanks for the feedback
i think the character design's already pretty badass, looks great!
<3
Design wise I think it's fine, anything else you add at this point would be about saying something about the character and think that's better expressed through clothing.
Ye, still have to make the outfit. Do you have any fun ideas?
Man have you really only been drawing for a year? I liked your style so I checked your previous submissions. Incredible progress if that's the case and very motivating.
Thank you so much! I'm glad my efforts are paying off <3